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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams illustrate, how to work
wave -
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wave-energy
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energy
machine
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machines
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 and
suitable
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the suitable
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 location of
machine
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the machine
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.
Overall
,
machine
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the machine
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 is worked
by
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with
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 the help of
waves
 on the seashore.
Design
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The design
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 of
this
machine
 has two chambers that are one
chamber
 is related to the
waves
 from
sea
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the sea
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, and another
chamber
id
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is
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 combined with turbines and
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a generator
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generator
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generators
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. With regards to the
waves
 and
water
 levels
air
 flow pass through the canal to the
second
chamber
 and by that, turbines rotate
voluntary
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voluntarily
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.
Similarly
,
air
 flows from outside
pass
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passes
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 inside the
chamber
, and other turbines rotate
also
. Meanwhile,
generator
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the generator
a generator
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 would produce electricity as depends on the power of
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the air
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air flow
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airflow
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.
While
,
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apply
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 turbine rotation extra
air flow
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airflow
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 will pass outside and to the
water
 as well. Over
to
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apply
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the location of
wave
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the wave
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energy
machine
, diagrams demonstrate that there are two locations
such
 as
,
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apply
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 one in deep-sea
water
 and
other
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the other
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 in
mid sea
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mid-sea
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water
.
In deep-sea
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Deep-sea
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water
 has been too much expensive but,
which
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apply
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may produce high power of
energy
by
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with
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 the help of larger
waves
.
On the other hand
,
mid sea
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mid-sea
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water
 might produce less
energy
 as compared to
the
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apply
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deep-sea
water
, because
which
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it
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 may get only smaller
waves
.
Nevertheless
,
cost
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the cost
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 of installation is low
in contrast
 to the large wave
energy
machine
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, machine, waves, chamber, water, air with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 8 times.
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