WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams illustrate, how to work
wave -
Correct your spelling
wave-energy
energy
machine
and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
suitable
location of Correct article usage
the suitable
machine
. Add an article
the machine
Overall
, machine
is worked Add an article
the machine
by
the help of Change preposition
with
waves
on the seashore.
Design
of Correct article usage
The design
this
machine
has two chambers that are one chamber
is related to the waves
from sea
, and another Add an article
the sea
chamber
id
combined with turbines and Correct your spelling
is
Correct article usage
a generator
generator
. With regards to the Fix the agreement mistake
generators
waves
and water
levels air
flow pass through the canal to the second
chamber
and by that, turbines rotate voluntary
. Change the word
voluntarily
Similarly
, air
flows from outside pass
inside the Fix the agreement mistake
passes
chamber
, and other turbines rotate also
. Meanwhile, generator
would produce electricity as depends on the power of Add an article
the generator
a generator
Correct article usage
the air
air flow
. Correct your spelling
airflow
While
,
turbine rotation extra Remove the comma
apply
air flow
will pass outside and to the Correct your spelling
airflow
water
as well.
Over to
the location of Change preposition
apply
wave
Correct article usage
the wave
energy
machine
, diagrams demonstrate that there are two locations such
as,
one in deep-sea Remove the comma
apply
water
and other
in Correct article usage
the other
mid sea
Add a hyphen
mid-sea
water
. In deep-sea
Change preposition
Deep-sea
water
has been too much expensive but, which
may produce high power of Correct pronoun usage
apply
energy
by
the help of larger Change preposition
with
waves
. On the other hand
, mid sea
Add a hyphen
mid-sea
water
might produce less energy
as compared to the
deep-sea Correct article usage
apply
water
, because which
may get only smaller Correct pronoun usage
it
waves
. Nevertheless
, cost
of installation is low Correct article usage
the cost
in contrast
to the large wave energy
machine
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, machine, waves, chamber, water, air with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 8 times.
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