Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Drug addiction is a great

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a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

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that many teenagers suffer from, and

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problem must be solved before it becomes a killer to the youth in our community.

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drugs cause

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a lot

of bad impacts on the addict like making

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of them or themselves

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mind useless, make them without feelings, and many other impacts. When some of the people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, that may be a wrong or quick decision because by

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they don'

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give the addicts the right to explain

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of them or themselves

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reasons to take these drugs. Maybe, some of these addicts take drugs as a treatment

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for

a disease and

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is the only

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to be healed,

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

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addicts may take the drugs because they don'

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find the

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to avoid taking drugs and don'

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find the instructions that lead them to do that.

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when the druggie takes the drug by his opinion, maybe in

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case he will be treated like a criminal

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for the reason that; on account of

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he might cause big troubles like hitting people without any reason, kidnapping or maybe killing.

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others that believe that they should be treated like patients,

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refers to the speaker or writer

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think they are wise and they give the druggies the chance to be someone new and be away from his past that

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perfect or complete or pure

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full of

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a lot

of wrong choices and nothing useful.

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And

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the druggie

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may feel

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impotance

the quality of being important and worthy of note

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to be treated and his importance to his community that needs him to be a good worker and benefit his country by his

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the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money

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, and knowing the importance to be away from the drugs that surely doesn'

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benefit him. In my opinion, the

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thinking

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closer to me, As I don'

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take the reaction without knowing the causes of the action itself.

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the end, not all the addicts have the same reason to take

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drugs, but

there are many reasons and we should know the reason

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and

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decide the best solution to overcome

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problem.