Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Drug addiction is a great
probelm
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
that many teenagers suffer from, and
this
problem must be solved before it becomes a killer to the youth in our community.
as
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As
drugs cause
alot
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a lot
of bad impacts on the addict like making
thier
of them or themselves
their
mind useless, make them without feelings, and many other impacts. When some of the people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, that may be a wrong or quick decision because by
this
way
they don'
t
give the addicts the right to explain
thier
of them or themselves
their
reasons to take these drugs. Maybe, some of these addicts take drugs as a treatment
to
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for
a disease and
this
is the only
way
to be healed,
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
addicts may take the drugs because they don'
t
find the
way
to avoid taking drugs and don'
t
find the instructions that lead them to do that.
but
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But
when the druggie takes the drug by his opinion, maybe in
this
case he will be treated like a criminal
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
he might cause big troubles like hitting people without any reason, kidnapping or maybe killing.
the
Suggestion
The
others that believe that they should be treated like patients,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think they are wise and they give the druggies the chance to be someone new and be away from his past that
absloltey
perfect or complete or pure
absolute
full of
alot
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a lot
of wrong choices and nothing useful.
and
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And
by
this
way
the druggie
may felt
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may feel
the
impotance
the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
to be treated and his importance to his community that needs him to be a good worker and benefit his country by his
jop
the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
job
, and knowing the importance to be away from the drugs that surely doesn'
t
benefit him. In my opinion, the
second
thinking
is the
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is, the
closer to me, As I don'
t
take the reaction without knowing the causes of the action itself.
in
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In
the end, not all the addicts have the same reason to take
drugs but
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drugs, but
there are many reasons and we should know the reason
first
and
then
decide the best solution to overcome
this
problem.

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