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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matter that affect them. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It
 is good to show children leaving a freedom environment because it could help children to grow stronger and confident.
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But
 it depends on the age of a child.
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For
 example little children cannot use clothes and they
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 like to eat sweets all the time. When
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 children
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are
 free to their choices they could make mistakes so parents should not dictate children what want but guide to the path.
For
example most
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example, most
 parents in western world teach their children
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present reasons and arguments
argue
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 rather than
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catch on a snag
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 when they do something wrong when children are thought to their own choice could easily manage the affairs when grow up. Children may sometimes give a good opinion so that it is good to understand rather than upsetting them many parents in Africa do not believe
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to
 listen children
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 cause many African children become vandals and aggressors toward the community.
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If
 we teach our youngster to determine their own
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choices, they
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Overall
 when we
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 our children that we make their future personality better parents respect children some like adults when the children try to refuse children something they should justify to them why there is fuse explain to them
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the reasons
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