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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their own countries. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to change negative attitudes?

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Travel propensity has increased since the invent of various modern age transportation system. Due to
this
increase many people
Suggestion
increase, many people
 believe that international tourism has a negative impact on their own country. In
this
 essay we will discuss the reasons and solutions to change negative impacts.
Tourism industry
Suggestion
The tourism industry
 has grown
expotentially
in an exponential manner
exponentially
 since the inventions of
airplanes
an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
aeroplanes
 and inter continent cruise voyages, these has resulted in many people travelling to other countries. Many people believe that
this
 international travel is causing the native currency being exported due to travel in other countries and purchase of forex, which is considered a bad thing for an economy.
Moreover
, people
also
 believe that domestic
toursim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
 would provide revenue and employment to local people. Speaking of solutions to overcome these negative attitudes, there should be awareness programmes conducted by government to make them understand the benefits of international tourism. They should be made aware the benefits of and the foreign currency inflow into their country and how it will boost the economy.
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