The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast-foods.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods  in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast-foods.
The chart shows that
high
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high-income
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income
earners consumed considerably more fast foods than the other
income
groups, spending more than twice as much on
hamburgers
(43
pence
per person per week) than on
fish
and
chips
or
pizza
(both under 20
pence
). Average
income
earners
also
favoured
hamburgers
, spending 33
pence
per person per week, followed by
fish
and
chips
at 24
pence
,
then
pizza
at 11
pence
.
Low
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Low-income
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income
earners appear to spend less than other
income
groups on fast foods, though
fish
and
chips
remains
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their most popular fast food, followed by
hamburgers
and
then
pizza
. From the graph we can see that in 1970,
fish
and
chips
were twice as popular as burgers,
pizza
being at that time the least popular fast food. The consumption of
hamburgers
and
pizza
has risen steadily over the
20 year
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20-year
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period to 1990
while
the consumption of
fish
and
chips
has been in decline over that same period with a slight increase in popularity since 1985
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