The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast-foods.
The chart shows that
high
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high-income
income
earners consumed considerably more fast foods than the other Use synonyms
income
groups, spending more than twice as much on Use synonyms
hamburgers
(43 Use synonyms
pence
per person per week) than on Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
or Use synonyms
pizza
(both under 20 Use synonyms
pence
). Average Use synonyms
income
earners Use synonyms
also
favoured Linking Words
hamburgers
, spending 33 Use synonyms
pence
per person per week, followed by Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
at 24 Use synonyms
pence
, Use synonyms
then
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pizza
at 11 Use synonyms
pence
. Use synonyms
Low
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Low-income
income
earners appear to spend less than other Use synonyms
income
groups on fast foods, though Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
Use synonyms
remains
their most popular fast food, followed by Change the verb form
remain
hamburgers
and Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
pizza
. From the graph we can see that in 1970, Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
were twice as popular as burgers, Use synonyms
pizza
being at that time the least popular fast food. The consumption of Use synonyms
hamburgers
and Use synonyms
pizza
has risen steadily over the Use synonyms
20 year
period to 1990 Add a hyphen
20-year
while
the consumption of Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
has been in decline over that same period with a slight increase in popularity since 1985Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, hamburgers, pence, fish, chips, pizza with synonyms.
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