Medical professionals such as doctors and nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to work. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?

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Nowadays, medical
pratitioners
someone who practices a learned profession
practitioners
have become of a high demand in the world. To the extent that most of them from poorer countries prefer to seek for greener pastures from richer nations.
This
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essay will discuss the problems that might arise from
such
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a situation and itemize ways to deal with it.
Firstly
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, hospitals in the poor states will have lots of uncontrollable medical issues.
Such
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conditions can go out of hand in as much as the best of the doctors and nurses continues to migrate for a good
leaving
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
.
For instance
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, there is a trending news of a fatal
acdident
an unfortunate mishap; especially one causing damage or injury
accident
that occurred in one of the African countries. On rushing some of the patients to a nearby
hospital we
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hospital, we
found out that only two doctors
was
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were
available to attend to patients with
amount
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the amount
a hundred waiting for treatment. Situations like
this
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can lead to dead of many
citizen
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citizens
if appropriate measure is not taken.
In addition
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, there are several ways to
surpress
to put down by force or authority
suppress
surpass
the challenge.
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firstly
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Firstly
, the government needs to encourage the doctors and nurses by increasing their salaries and bonuses and provide quality clinic facilities.
On the other hand
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, the health board can create a license
restrictions
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restriction
in
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a way that a license in one country cannot be used
any where
at or in or to any place
anywhere
in the world.
For example
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, all
this
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will promote the health system. Conclusively, living a good life with the assistance of medical
practioners
someone who practices a learned profession
practitioners
can increase life span and a
nations
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nation's
population.
However
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, in as much as there will be some unbearable conditions due to
unavailabilty
the quality of not being available when needed
unavailability
of doctors and nurses, putting
approriate
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
ways in place can reduce hard times for the poorer countries.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Healthcare sector
  • Workload
  • Cultural barriers
  • Economic implications
  • Quality of care
  • Mortality rates
  • Incentivize
  • Remuneration
  • International agreements
  • Infrastructure
  • Underserved areas
  • Exchange programs
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