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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

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In the previous years, people practiced communal living and big family
size
 was a way of life.
However
, lately, there is a colossal upsurge globally for want of lesser family
size
 over big families. It is advantageous to have a fewer
size
 of family owing to the fact that it is more likely to ensure overall well-being of its members, but there are some drawbacks which need to be taken into account. There are a number of plus points to small family.
First
, it has a more likelihood of bringing forth individuals with a better life.
That is
 to say, with lesser number of family members, there is a greater access to an adequate diet, better health care and life in general.
Moreso
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, children from
this
 kind of family have more chances of attending the best schools which give them an edge in the society in the long run.
In addition
, parents are able to focus their offspring and raise responsible citizens who can contribute positively to the growth and development of a Nation.
On the other hand
, despite the merits above, some pitfalls still exist. Parents in the small family settings are usually over protective over their children because there are not a lot of them; the children are restricted from blending with other members of the society.
This
 can make the children too reliant on their guardians over things that can sometimes be sorted out themselves.
Also
, the do not have the opportunity to be as versatile as they would have been of they are exposed to larger family members.
For instance
, young ones are able to learn different skills and manners from various members of a larger family. In conclusion, while is a more and more increased preference for smaller family
size
, people should be wary of the disadvantages like overly dependent citizens that it brings.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial stability
  • Living standards
  • Concentrated resources
  • Parent-child bonding
  • Upbringing
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Supportive network
  • Cooperation
  • Multigenerational
  • Cultural traditions
  • Agricultural communities
  • Loneliness
  • Social competencies
  • Financial strain
  • Resource dilution
  • Education opportunities
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