Some people think that it is best to live in a vertical city (mean that people work and live in high buildings) while others think a horizontal city is better. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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While many believe in vertical cities as the best choice for urban living, others think that a
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city
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A city
City
The city
which is horizontally developed is much better.
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I agree with the latter position,
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this
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essay will analyse both views. There are reasons why many opt for vertical cities.
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with, they feel a sense of community when sharing a space with others.
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, many people now prefer living in a home where everything is laid out on a single floor plan as they see managing an apartment is less stressful than a house.
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, many countries simply do not have space to build horizontal cities. Singapore is a prime example; in
this
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city
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state, people see
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used of buildings of many stories equipped with elevators; tall
high-rises
high rises
as an optimal option that marries the needs of both
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residential
and green spaces.
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, I am convinced that horizontal
city
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is better for a number of reasons.
Firstly
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,
this
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way
how something is done or how it happens
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of urbanisation is more sustainable as it frees people from the stress of living in a concrete jungle (
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A
vertical
city
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).
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, developing a horizontal
city
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helps minimise the level of destruction when a
city
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is hit by
manmade
not of natural origin; prepared or made artificially
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or natural disasters
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as September 11 attacks or earthquakes.
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, if
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and skyscrapers become nothing but an obsession, it is certainly not a good trend. Environmentally speaking,
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trend poses an immense pressure on the world's increasingly scarce resources when resources are consumed in massive amounts to power these
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glasses
walled buildings, let alone the greenhouse gas emissions during the building process. In conclusion, though developing vertical cities is an inevitable trend, I would campaign for
horizontal
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Horizontal
cities as a sustainable future for urban development.
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