Write a letter to the television channel Manager about boring programs during the day time. Tell him about the programs, give suggestions.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain about the low quality of programs, broadcast by your channel
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long
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time. Let me explain it in detail. We are
regular
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viewer
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viewers
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of your channel since it has started transmission. Unfortunately, the quality of content is gradually going downwards with the passage of time. One of the main
problem
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is in the script, which is not well written nowadays.
In addition
, the material is totally out of context, do not
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correlate
with the
audiance
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audience
. Repeat telecast is another major issue that
need
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to be addressed urgently. I would like to suggest you
to
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hire completely fresh talent with new ideas and energy. It could be writers, directors or artists. I would
also
like you to
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programs for every age from children to elderly people
,
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so that everyone can enjoy. It could be cartoons or social news but must be related to our culture. Hoping for a prompt response from you regarding
this
matter! Yours faithfully, Farrukh Maqsood
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