In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

Nowadays there seems to be an

increase

in the

crime

rate and particularly most crimes are becoming more violent than before. There are several factors linked to

this

and quite a number of solutions will be put forward.

Firstly

, the high rates of unemployment can be seen as the major reason why crimes are constantly on an

increase

. Youth's now have no jobs or something engaging

them thereby

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them, thereby

making them turn to

crime

as an alternative.

Also

with the easy access to drugs has caused teenagers to become more violent than ever before. Another interesting factor is the breakdown of the family unit which is common these days. Most males do not have their father's as

role model

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a role model

role models

and

subsequently

turn to

crime

.

Thus

unemployment and lack of a family structure all contribute to the

increase

in

crimes

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crime

rates. One of the most significant change that can be put in place is to create jobs or opening of a community

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

for teenagers and youths. When kid's are engaged with something productive they would hardly have time to commit or engage in illegal activities.

In

addition families

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addition, families

needs to put in more efforts in the upbringing of their offsprings as

this

will help them become responsible citizens later in life. In conclusion, high unemployment rates and

breakdown

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the breakdown

of the family unit are several causes for

increase

crime

and

creation

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the creation

of jobs

,

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,

more commitment from relatives are some of the possible

solution

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solutions

of

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for

tackling these issues.