Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor that their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Childhood obesity has become a cause of concern in Australia to an extent that two

third

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of the children are obese.

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essay will discuss why I completely disagree that schools should take measures to what their pupils eat.

Firstly

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, one of the disagreements is that educational centres are for studying not for eating and exercises. Teachers are expected to teach and educate their pupils on new skills that will be useful when they graduate.

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, it is the responsibility of parents to cook their wards meal.

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, to an extent will serve as a

grantee

a written assurance that some product or service will be provided or will meet certain specifications

guarantee

to what a

child

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consume

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consumes

and may not have

negative effect

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a negative effect

on their body system because it is a

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home made

made or produced in the home or by yourself

homemade

dish.

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, in a recent interview of a model, who has won several awards, explained to the interviewer how she strictly eats

home

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made food and how her parents ensured

herself

female pronoun; a female, or something regarded as female, e.g. a ship

she

and her siblings wakes up as early as 5:00am on a daily basis for some indoor and outdoor exercises before preparing for

school

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. Parents

needs

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need

to take ownership in monitoring what their kids eat.

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, an agreement is that the number of hours spent in schools

are more than the time spent

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is more than the time spent

are more than the time spent

at

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.

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could be an

oversite

an unintentional omission resulting from failure to notice something

oversight

for parents to ignore their responsibilities and leave it for

school

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teachers

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more concern with the

child

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's studies and less concern with a

child

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consume provide the kid is fine.

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, my sister

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a secondary

school

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teacher, cares more

on

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about

impacting her students with knowledge rather than controlling what her pupils eat.

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for sure will be useful in the life of a

child

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in the future either by getting a good job or becoming a successful

busines

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

person. In conclusion, it was discussed that a

school

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is for learning while, a

home

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is for monitoring, caring about what a

child

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eats and all workouts

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required to be done. In my opinion, I absolutely disagree that schools should have control of a

child

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's diet.