Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion including relevant examples.

Whether to give money as
gift
to teenagers is becoming
increasingly controversial topic
Suggestion
an increasingly controversial topic
. While for some giving monetary gifts to young people is preferred choice but for others it is not a wise decision.
This
essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth and explain why choosing cash as
gift
Suggestion
a gift
to youngsters is not
best
Suggestion
the best
option.
Growing number
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A growing number
of people believe that perfect
gift
for teenagers should be
cash
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cashed
because it gives them freedom to buy things they like.
Primary reason
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A primary reason
for people to believe that money is best
gift
is that it can
used
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use
for securing savings for important things.
For example
, savings can help in funding college tuition funds, hostel fees etc.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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