A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is
farrukh
. I am Change the capitalization
Farrukh
the
resident of Correct article usage
a
"green
Correct your spelling
the Green
garden society
" in Islamabad. I am writing Correct your spelling
Garden Society
this
letter to request you to not close the Diamond sports club in our vicinity. Let me explain it in detail. As you know that
Correct word choice
apply
such
sort of facilities are considered to be the lungs of the community. They are essential for the mental and physical well being
of the inhabitants. People used to go there for exercise and Add a hyphen
well-being
increase
their social fabric. Students of the area Fix the infinitive
to increase
also
visit it to release their strees
and become active. Correct your spelling
stress
Therefore
, the plan of
the closure of Change preposition
to
gymnasium
and Correct article usage
the gymnasium
build
a market Wrong verb form
building
instead
is comletely
futile because we already have one Correct your spelling
completely
super market
in our society. There is no need Correct your spelling
supermarket
of
another. I would like to suggest you Change preposition
for
to
keep it open not but Remove the particle
apply
also
allow the general public to reap up benefits of it. I would also
suggest you to
start minimal Remove the particle
apply
entery
fee. In Correct your spelling
entry
this
way not only the income will increase which can be use
to maintain it, but Change the verb form
be used
also
individuals will take care of Correct article usage
the equipments
equipments
inside. Hoping for a positive response from your side! Yours faithfully, Farrukh Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
maqsood
I urge you to keep it open. you can Change the capitalization
Maqsood
also
increase. i
would suggest you Change the capitalization
I
to
addRemove the particle
apply
i
read Change the capitalization
I
this
news in the local tabloid exprees
news. people Correct your spelling
express
are
living sedentary lives the shall be deprived of the little bit Correct pronoun usage
who are
Correct your spelling
exercise
Change preposition
of excercise
excercise
they get exerciseCorrect your spelling
exercise
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.