A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is
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. I am
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resident of
"green
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the Green
garden society
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" in Islamabad. I am writing
this
letter to request you to not close the Diamond sports club in our vicinity. Let me explain it in detail. As you know
that
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such
sort of facilities are considered to be the lungs of the community. They are essential for the mental and physical
well being
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of the inhabitants. People used to go there for exercise and
increase
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their social fabric. Students of the area
also
visit it to release their
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stress
and become active.
Therefore
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the closure of
gymnasium
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the gymnasium
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and
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a market
instead
is
comletely
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completely
futile because we already have one
super market
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in our society. There is no need
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another. I would like to suggest you
to
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keep it open not but
also
allow the general public to reap up benefits of it. I would
also
suggest you
to
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start minimal
entery
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entry
fee. In
this
way not only the income will increase which can
be use
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to maintain it, but
also
individuals will take care of
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the equipments
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equipments
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equipment
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inside. Hoping for a positive response from your side! Yours faithfully, Farrukh
maqsood
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I urge you to keep it open. you can
also
increase.
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would suggest you
to
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add
i
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read
this
news in the local tabloid
exprees
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express
news. people
are
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living sedentary lives the shall be deprived of the little bit
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exercise
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of excercise
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excercise
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exercise
they get exercise
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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