All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them

Nigeria is a country that suffers the adverse effects of epileptic
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supply which of course would retard whatever benefits electric cars would bring.
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, I disagree that All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. I disagree that all cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them bearing in mind the following reason which include: epileptic power supply and cost. The electric power generated in Nigeria is too epileptic for any
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powered vehicle to thrive. Nigerians depend solely on generating plants to power their homes, offices and businesses; if
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is the case, how would electric powered cars be charged to full capacity for use. The situation is so terrible that even in some places they do not see
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for months owing to faults which the
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distribution companies fail to detect and you want these same people go on depending on electric powered vehicle after all they have suffered powering their homes? It is not a feasible alternative to fossil fuel cars as
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I maintain my stance that "all cars that burn fossil fuels should not be banned". Conclusively, I wish to reaffirm my stance by arguing against that all cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.
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is because it is not a viable option for all countries. Many developed nations and countries would
benefit but
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benefit, but
the less developed ones would suffer greatly as
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, it is not a visible option. Apart from the benefits, the cost of changing all fossil fuel powered vehicles to electric powered vehicles is too high for
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government
, who barely generates money to
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feed
it
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its
population and is heavily dependent on foreign aids, loans and support from
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developing
nations.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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