In many places, New homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

As the populations 50 increasing in numerous areas of cities that leads the requirement of housing. Whereas a number of people demand to construct residence societies in those places which are outskirts of cities while others
are against to
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are against this
this
proposal. Well, I suppose building housing societies in
countryside
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the countryside
could cause devastation to the nature. Projection of the environment is the chief actor to save the living being. Due to the
industrialisation
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industry
, climate has been changed drastically. To develop housing schemes, construction companies have started the degradation of trees to get the piece of fertile lands.
this
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This
phenomenon encourages the wild animals to evacuate the land and lost its beautiful
sights scenes
Accept comma addition
sights, scenes
as well as reduction in cultivation.
more over
in addition
Moreover
More over
,
this
could cost a lot for
next generation
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the next generation
in a form of polluted air as well as lack of food that promotes starvation.
despite
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Despite
all these facts builders should change their strategies by constructing vertical housing schemes like skyscrapers or built multiple
hai
used as a greeting
hi
high
hair
rising stories building.
because
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Because
of that the extensive demand of housing for have been fulfilled.
Although
,
authority's or government
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the authority's or government
should execute the plant to plant trees on top of each
highrisin
used of buildings of many stories equipped with elevators; tall
high-rise
building.
Thus
,
this
act
will helps
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will help
to maintain the nature and its courses all over the cities.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, planting trees
also
provide assistance for the supply of clean and fresh air, fruits and so on. The sum of all the statements I personally believe that human needs often leads to get a stop if the safety measures are not per suit sincerely.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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