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Space exploration costs tax payers’ an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?

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In modern times, the issue of spending
money
 on
space
exploration
 has become highly controversial. There are those who say that should be
spend
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spending
money
space
exploration
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exploration, however
however
 others believe that expending much
money
 on
this
 field is empty.
This
 essay will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of
this
 argument and provide my overall opinion. From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of
this
 issue to find new residential areas and supply natural
energy
 source. Perhaps the main advantages of
this
 issue that these explorations would be provide new livable regions for human being outside of
world
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the world
.
For example
, keeping current
exploration
on
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of
 the Mars would be
explore
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explored
exploring
 novel region in the short time. A
further
 point in favour of investing
on
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in
 the
space
exploration
 is that these studies supply novel natural
energy
.
This
 is because nowadays decreasing of natural
energy
 sources
on
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in
 the our world and
this
 case is leading to obtain new
energy
 source out of the world. Despite these arguments, there are
also
 various disadvantages to
much expending
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much, expending
 to exploring on the
space
 is that these explorations
is
Suggestion
are
request
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requesting
high amount
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a high amount
 of
money
.
This
 is because
cost
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the cost
 of spaceships, fuels, technological tools and so do and these study phases need
exorbitant amount
Suggestion
an exorbitant amount
 of charge. In conclusion, it must be said that invest on the
space
exploration
 ha clear advantages and disadvantages. Taking the above into account, it would appear that there are more advantages than disadvantages between spending
money
 on the
space
exploration
 or not spend it.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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