Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion including relevant examples.

Many people think that

money

is the best

gift

to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own

opinion including

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opinion, including

relevant examples. 1.51 Some would argue that teenagers should be given

money

as a

gift

, while others oppose it. While

money

could fulfil some of their essential needs, I believe that youngsters could misuse it to buy materials that have

negative impact

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a negative impact

on them if given as a present. On the one hand, when youth between 13 to 19 are availed of certain amount of finance, they could

use it spend

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use it to spend

on some of their important needs.

This

is to say that there are certain items that they

need but

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need, but

ashamed to ask their parents or relatives.

For example

, girls in Nepal are hesitant to discuss about their puberty and ashamed of their natural

menstruration

the monthly discharge of blood from the uterus of nonpregnant women from puberty to menopause

menstruation

cycle, which forces them to

use

old clothes as a sanitary pad, which may contain bacteria,

instead

of safer products available in the market.

However

, I believe that most mothers are open about these things with their teenage daughters and provide

such

items without being asked.

On the other hand

, youngsters

use

the

money

, given as a present, to purchase

unnecessary item

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an unnecessary item

that may pose a negative effect.

This

means youth

think

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thinks

that gifted

money

is to fulfil their personal desire and they are not required to explain their parents where they have spent that amount.

Consequently

, they may end up buying the materials they are not supposed to have or

use

.

For example

, a recent survey revealed that 30% of the teens in the USA spend their extra pocket

money

to buy illegal medicines; so

financial

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the financial gift

gift

would only encourage them to do more and others to start.

Therefore

, allowing teenagers to own

money

as a

gift

tend them to

use

it in a subject that may have

detrimental effect

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a detrimental effect

on them. In conclusion,

although

financial

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the financial gift

gift

is crucial for some teenagers because it enables them to

purchace

obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction

purchase

purchased

an item

that is

extremely important for them, I believe that most of them would misuse it in the product that have

adverse result

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an adverse result

adverse resulted

adverse results

on

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in

of

them.