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A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase their spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extend do you agree?

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Providing the citizen's safety is one of the duties of the government.
Thus
, according to some the state should spend more on military spending and spend less on social welfare,
such
 as, health, education, retirement benefits, etc. In my opinion,
denfense
Suggestion
the defence
defence
 is more crucial than social benefits,
therefore
, I agree that the government ought to increase their spending on the military and spend less on social benefits. A good reason to increase
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
 spending and decrease social welfare spending is that the country will be more vulnerable without the spending on
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
. At present, the state's response to the external threats is vital
since
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for
 any attack to the nation will be more likely to
distrupt
make a break in
disrupt
distribute
distrust
 its social services.
This
 risk will be easily reduced by increasing the expenditure on military spending. Another point to consider is that according to Maslow's pyramid, feeling safe is one of
our our fundemantal
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our fundamental
our our fundamental
 needs.
For instance
, people who
life
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live
 in safer countries will feel a lot happier than those who live in a country where it provides a good social services but it is under threat.
Moreover
, people in a safe country will be able to enjoy life more and it will be a great reward to the society. In
conclision
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
, nations must increase their military expenditure in order not to
distrupt
make a break in
disrupt
distrust
 their social services like education,
healt
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
, etc.
and
Suggestion
And
 in order to provide their citizens a happy life.
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