You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As we can notice that the automation industry is playing a crucial

role

in our lives. With more advancement, the industrial science will replace many resources which are going to be extinct. Today, our world is going through severe calamities. At

first

, it can be

envisage

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envisaged

that these problems may be overcome by our

advance

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advanced

technology

however

, in my point of view I believe that depending only on

technology

is not going to be sustainable for a long period. From past many years, the scientists are working to reduce our major environmental problem

such

as carbon emission which is causing

to increase

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increasing

in global temperature. Being said that, the

technology

only can not help to deal with

this

issue. Everyone has to participate in order to achieve the desire goals.

For example

, the scientists

has recently worked

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have recently worked

with the

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

around the world to form an agreement which states that every country has to take part in the goal to reduce the carbon emission by two percent by 2050.

This

examplify

be characteristic of

exemplifies

that the

role

of human is as important as the

technology

Another

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Other

important issues which

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are

indirectly related to our climate is fast paced development of countries which are emitting the natural resources

such

as plants and forests.

For instance

, many countries in order to achieve their desire

gdp

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GDP

do manufacture on a very large scale, due to which many livestocks is being affected. It should be considered that the natural resources are limited and should be

use

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used

appropriately to save our climate and

exo

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Exo

-system. To summarise, I believe that the

role

technology

in solving environmental issues is as important as the

role

of individuals in the society.

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental problems
technology
solve
reduce
pollution levels
renewable energy sources
waste management systems
sufficient
human behavior
consumption patterns
collaboration
policy-making
essential

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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