Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Now a day most of the
country
has a free
health
service
and the rest of the
country
should have a free
health
service
for their
country
residents Each and every person should have a
health
card to get cured in
time
from common diseases, flues and virus as due to population and
gobal
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
global
warming, frequently people are having some different kind of flues and It troubles them
lot
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a lot
if they will not do
treatment
in
time
and later on it become their death
als
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
well.
Its
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It's
not feasible for each and every resident to do the
treatment
in
time
due to financial situation
so
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so, moreover
moreover
, if they have
health
card
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card, then
then
they can easily admit in the hospital to cure from theses
dieases
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
. As per my suggestion every
country
should have free
health
service
, even if
this
means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the
service but
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service, but
common people can get benefited and make the
treatment
on
time
of common
health
issues as
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issues, as
usually most of the
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
are charging tax from the people and based on that same
country
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country's
goverenment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
should look after people's common
health
issues.
then
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Then
government can save around 20% of the
people
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person's
life who were dead due to
this
common
health
issues like flues, viral fever, dengue etc. Apart from that
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should think
on
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about
the latest medical treatments for the common people so that they will get benefited for the expensive treatments. As per my suggestion,
Country ruling party
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the Country ruling party
a Country ruling party
should export general medicines for the expensive
treatment
inside the
country
instead
of exporting expensive medicines from outside
country
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
that
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
will save their revenue and as well as
also
save their
country
peoples life by using general medicine within the free
health
service
.
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