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Students perform higher at school when are rewarded rather than punished .To what extent do you agree .

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School
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The school
 plays a vital role in student's life
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All the students do not perform at a same level.Pupils perform well at school when they get rewards from their teachers
instead
 of
punishment
.They work hard to achieve good marks and to get
position
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a position
 in the class. I totally agree with the given statement and will discuss my
view-points
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoints
viewpoint
 with proper example.
To begin
 with my initial view
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,
corporal
punishment
 may result in lowering the confidence level among scholars.
However they
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However, they
 often get
frustated
disappointingly unsuccessful
frustrated
 and avoid going to school.Some pupils become introverts.
Secondly
,
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,
due to the fear of
punishment
,
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,
few students feel mental
stress which
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stress, which
 leads to poor performance in academics.
For instance
,
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,
recent research has shown that due to practice of harsh
punishment
 in some schools
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,
scholars behave rudely and show disrespect towards their guardians and tutors.
On the contrary
,
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,
students get motivation and encouragement when they get rewards.They always try to perform better and excel in their studies and extra-curricular activities.
In addition
 to
this
,
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,
sense
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a sense
the sense
 of competition increases in classes because all students work hard to achieve prizes.It eventually leads to their overall development.Pupils who are rewarded feel happy and proud and act as inspiration for others. To put it in a nutshell
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,
I pen
down saying
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down, saying
 that physical
punishment
 in schools should be avoided.Mentors must find some other ways to motivate students to study.
Moreover
,
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,
scholars must be rewarded for their achievements to maintain and improve their performance.
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