You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college -Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her -Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear John,
How are you? It’s nice to hear from you. Thank you so much for letting me give some advice about going to college or getting a job. I think
,
the work is a good thing.
Remove the comma
apply
Firstly
, college expenses, Linking Words
such
as tuition Linking Words
fee
, commuting costs and books, are very high. I’ve already known that you didn’t save enough money and your family may not able to help you. As I know, you won’t enjoy going to college. Fix the agreement mistake
fees
Secondly
, you’re 18. You’d like to live alone far from your family. Surely, having a chance to work 4 to 8 hours a day, is a good idea.
Linking Words
However
, searching the net would be suitable to find a Linking Words
part time
or Add a hyphen
part-time
a
Correct article usage
apply
full time
job. If you’re interested in scientific cases, you can work in a library or a school. Anyhow, working in a big store is a fine suggestion, because of having Add a hyphen
full-time
nice
relationship.
Have a pleasure time! I wish you’ll be happy Add an article
a nice
of
an excellent job!
Your best friend,
PeterChange preposition
with
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,