You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college -Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her -Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear John, How are you? It’s nice to hear from you. Thank you so much for letting me give some advice about going to college or getting a job. I think

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, college expenses,

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, commuting costs and books, are very high. I’ve already known that you didn’t save enough money and your family may not able to help you. As I know, you won’t enjoy going to college.

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, you’re 18. You’d like to live alone far from your family. Surely, having a chance to work 4 to 8 hours a day, is a good idea.

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, searching the net would be suitable to find a

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job. If you’re interested in scientific cases, you can work in a library or a school. Anyhow, working in a big store is a fine suggestion, because of having

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relationship. Have a pleasure time! I wish you’ll be happy

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an excellent job! Your best friend, Peter