DISCIPLINE IS AN INCREASING PROBLEM IN MODREN SCHOOL. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT DISCIPLINE SHOULD BE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF TEACHERS,WHILE OTHER THINK THAT IS THE RPOLE OF PARENTS.

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DISCIPLINE IS NECESSARY IN EVERY FIELD OF LIFE. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT
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ITS A MAJOR RESPONSIBILITY OF TEACHERS TO ENFORCING A HIGH ATTIQUETES AND BEHAVIUOR IN CHILDREN WHILE ITHER HOLD PARENTS.IN MY OPINION
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BOTH TREACHER AND PARENTS EVALUATE THE ETHICS IN CHILDREN. SOME ARGUE THAT ITS A MAJOR RES
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PONSIBILITY OF A
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BECAUSE CHILDREN SPEND MOER TIME IN SCHOOL THAN HOME SO TEACHERS PLAY THEIR ROLE R=ENFORCING THE BEHAVIOUR IN CHILDREN. A SCHOOL IS APLACE WHERE A STUDENT CAN TEACH MORE THAN A HOUSE. IN SCHOOL DUE TO STRICT ENVIRONMENT CHILDREN
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DUE TO THE FEAR OF PUNISHMENT FROM
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AND PRINCIPAL
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CHILDREN OBEY THE RULES. AND
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THING MAKE THEM A MORE RESPONSIBLE IN A SOCIETY. WHILE OTHER BELEIVE THAT PARENTS ARE RESPONSIBLE TO MAKE THEM RESPONSIBLE AND GOOD MAN IN SOCIETY. PARENTS ARE WELL KNOWN ABOUT THE BAD HABITS OF THEIR CHILDREN.SO THEY CAN EASILY ERADICATE THESE HABITS.PARENTS ARE RESPONSIBLE TO MAKE THEM MORE SENSIBLE MAN IN A SOCIETY. TO CONCLUDE IT. BOTH
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AND PARENTS PALY THEIR ROLE IN TEACHING THEM WITH GOOD ETHICS AND MANNERS.BOTH ARE THE RESPONSIBLE OF INDISCIPLINEY IN THEIR CHILDREN.SO A GOOD COMMUNICAATION LINK SHOILD BE IN A PARENTS AND
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FOR THE LEARNING BEHAVIOUR OF THEIR CHILDREN.

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