Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.

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criminal
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choose
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of all, nations authorities have to check the motive at the rear of the
crime
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, they should take some action about
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criminal
punishment
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