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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweighs the disadvantages?

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At the present time, college students prefer studying aboard in an increasing way. One major disadvantage of studying in a foreign
country
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 is the high cost of it, despite the disadvantages, a common advantage is the opportunity to accumulate more ideas about their culture. In my opinion, students are better off studying
abroad
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abroad, although
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 minor obstacles
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need
 overcoming. Studying in a foreign
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 can lead to personal growth and exploring new cultures. To clarify, studying abroad gives university students the chance to get to know the world from a different perspective and discover fascinating lifestyles.
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, when I used to study in Lebanon I learned about their astonishing traditions and mouth watering salad called Tabouli. Overall,
this
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 challenging trip to adapt to a new culture is what help you grow as a person. One disadvantage of studying somewhere else is the cost of it. To put in
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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 words, studying in your own
country
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 is far more inexpensive than pursuing your studies in a foreign
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.
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, when I decided to study in Lebanon I compared the prices of the trip, hostility and the university and it appeared to be double the price of studying in my
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. In short, if you are not looking forward to spend a great deal of
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money, then
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 you should stick to studying in your
country
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. Myriad amount of university students chose to pursue their studies in a foreign
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 rather than their own
country
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.
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 studying abroad can get expensive, it can help a person grow spiritually and gain information about outside cultures. I believe that these challenging experiences
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 what makes studying abroad more beneficial.
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