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In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them?

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Owing to the problems which a growing population of overweight people, as well as
decreasing
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decreases
level
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the level
 of their health cause number of issues in some countries. Some people think that the key reasons which cause
this
 issue are the
price availability
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price, availability
 of fast
food
 and incredibly fast increasing number of fast
food
 restaurants worldwide. I completely agree with the most widespread idea of doing
sport
 as the way of getting fit and becoming healthier at the same time.
Firstly
, there are a great number of restaurants which serve
international delicious
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delicious international
 cuisines and the smell of those dishes is mouth-watering, but the price of
such
food
 is not affordable for everyone, in most countries just high classes of affluent people can enjoy
such
 places, the rest of citizens go to fast
food
 restaurants.
Secondly
, there are innumerable amount of
food
courts which
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courts, which
 are usually located in the most accessible and the nearest districts that lots of people pass every minute. So, it is not
surprisingly
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surprising
, that it is very difficult to withstand
such
 places if one is hungry and there is not much time for lunch. Since the overweight problem has appeared most experts have been considering
sport
 as the best solution to cope with
sedentary lifestyle
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a sedentary lifestyle
sedentary lifestyles
, to get fit and to become healthier. There are decent online training programs, books, gym memberships which are included group classes, personal diet schedule and discussions with experts concerning one’s personal characteristics and preferences. As a
sport
 obsessed person, I would strongly recommend to buy a membership of a gym and follow a diet. In conclusion, to deal with an increasing population of unfit, overweight people replace the sedentary lifestyle
with
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to
 an active one, full of
sport
 and healthy diets is the best way to prolong the lifespan of the population.

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