On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to my lost

laptop

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. I have travelled

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Paris at the

last

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week. When I came back

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home I saw that I have lost my

laptop

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. Its properties are Toshiba 650D, RAM 8GB with hard disc 1 TB.

Cost

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The cost

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of my

laptop

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is $1650. There are three

sticker

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- Batman, Messi and Spiderman on

cover

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the cover

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of my

laptop

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that my little brother glues on it. It is very valuable for me. I think

insurance

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the insurance

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company should return

value

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the value

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of my notebook. Please report

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to me

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that what I should do

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the next

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step

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this

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of this

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process. I hope you will quickly initiate suitable solutions in regard to

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matter. Please respond at

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earliest convenience. Yours sincerely Garay Ashirov

Submitted by garayasirov on Tue Dec 17 2019

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

128 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
substantiate
correspondence

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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities Closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem. Others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.