Most scientific inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

It is a fact that we, all
human
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humans
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have been relying on new
innovation
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innovations
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. Some
people
claim
this
is a waste of time or just
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too much and
not
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really worth it. I disagree with
this
statement and the following essay will discuss the details. There are many scientific
discoveries
and innovations that have been supporting our
lives
.
Although
it is quite
time consuming
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and costs a lot. And it does not always succeed.
However
, great scientific inventions have been bringing hope and comfortable
lives
to our society. Thanks to scientists, our life
became
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much easier
due to
the
discoveries
of renewable
energy
such
as wind
energy
,
solor
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solar
energy
,
fossile
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fossil
fuel and so on. The
discoveries
of
cure
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cures
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for terminal
disease
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diseases
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like cancer,
HIV
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and HIV
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saved many
people
's
lives
.
People
would not have been able to
survived
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unless some scientist found the cure for an epidemic disease back in
old
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days. The world changed significantly thanks to
this
since
people
no longer had to suffer from those
illness
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.
Furthermore
, years of research and invention made
impossible
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it impossible
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to possible.
For example
, Moon travel
brought
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great
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a great
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impact on society.
This
proved that there could be possibilities for travel to another planet
such
as
the
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Mars.
On the other hand
, it is true that the failure of inventions comes at
cost
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a cost
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interms
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in terms
of expenses,
energy
and time.
Also
, it could lose credit from
public
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the public
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.
However
, how can you know whether it could
be
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succseed
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succeed
or fail before you attempt something? No one could know the result without trying. Some anticipation or precaution should be considered but it is worth trying if there are possibilities because that might turn out to be great
discoveries
. In conclusion,
while
there are some
ramification
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for
failure
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the failure
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of scientific inventions. I believe that
advantantages
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advantages
are far more than disadvantages since great
discoveries
often
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people
's
lives
and society in a positive way.
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