Most scientific inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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It is a fact that we, all

human

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humans

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have been relying on new

innovation

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innovations

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. Some

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claim

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is a waste of time or just

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too much and

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really worth it. I disagree with

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statement and the following essay will discuss the details. There are many scientific

discoveries

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and innovations that have been supporting our

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it is quite

time consuming

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and costs a lot. And it does not always succeed.

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, great scientific inventions have been bringing hope and comfortable

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to our society. Thanks to scientists, our life

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much easier

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the

discoveries

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of renewable

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such

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as wind

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solor

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solar

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fossile

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fossil

fuel and so on. The

discoveries

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cure

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cures

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for terminal

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diseases

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like cancer,

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and HIV

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saved many

people

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lives

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would not have been able to

survived

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unless some scientist found the cure for an epidemic disease back in

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days. The world changed significantly thanks to

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since

people

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no longer had to suffer from those

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illnesses

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, years of research and invention made

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to possible.

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, Moon travel

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great

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impact on society.

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proved that there could be possibilities for travel to another planet

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the

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Mars.

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, it is true that the failure of inventions comes at

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interms

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in terms

of expenses,

energy

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and time.

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, it could lose credit from

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the public

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, how can you know whether it could

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succseed

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succeed

or fail before you attempt something? No one could know the result without trying. Some anticipation or precaution should be considered but it is worth trying if there are possibilities because that might turn out to be great

discoveries

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. In conclusion,

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there are some

ramification

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ramifications

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for

failure

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the failure

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of scientific inventions. I believe that

advantantages

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advantages

are far more than disadvantages since great

discoveries

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often

changes

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change

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people

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lives

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and society in a positive way.

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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

314 words

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Most scientific inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle this.

Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?

In today’s society people tend to buy many things and throw them away even though they can still be used. What are some causes of this behaviour? What are some effects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.