Most scientific inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
It is a fact that we, all
human
have been relying on new Fix the agreement mistake
humans
innovation
. Some Fix the agreement mistake
innovations
people
claim this
is a waste of time or just cost
too much and Wrong verb form
costs
not
really worth it. I disagree with Add a missing verb
is not
this
statement and the following essay will discuss the details. There are many scientific discoveries
and innovations that have been supporting our lives
. Although
it is quite time consuming
and costs a lot. And it does not always succeed. Add a hyphen
time-consuming
However
, great scientific inventions have been bringing hope and comfortable lives
to our society. Thanks to scientists, our life became
much easier Wrong verb form
has become
due to
the discoveries
of renewable energy
such
as wind energy
, solor
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solar
energy
, fossile
fuel and so on. The Correct your spelling
fossil
discoveries
of cure
for terminal Fix the agreement mistake
cures
disease
like cancer, Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
HIV
saved many Correct word choice
and HIV
people
's lives
. People
would not have been able to survived
unless some scientist found the cure for an epidemic disease back in Change the verb
survive
old
days. The world changed significantly thanks to Correct article usage
the old
this
since people
no longer had to suffer from those illness
. Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
Furthermore
, years of research and invention made impossible
to possible. Correct pronoun usage
it impossible
For example
, Moon travel brought
Verb problem
has
great
impact on society. Correct article usage
a great
This
proved that there could be possibilities for travel to another planet such
as the
Mars. Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, it is true that the failure of inventions comes at cost
Correct article usage
a cost
interms
of expenses, Correct your spelling
in terms
energy
and time. Also
, it could lose credit from public
. Add an article
the public
However
, how can you know whether it could be
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apply
succseed
or fail before you attempt something? No one could know the result without trying. Some anticipation or precaution should be considered but it is worth trying if there are possibilities because that might turn out to be great Correct your spelling
succeed
discoveries
. In conclusion, while
there are some ramification
for Fix the agreement mistake
ramifications
failure
of scientific inventions. I believe that Add an article
the failure
advantantages
are far more than disadvantages since great Correct your spelling
advantages
discoveries
often changes
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change
people
's lives
and society in a positive way.Submitted by 08875 on
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