Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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In the recent years the government has resorted to increasing the price of petrol as the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. But in my opinion,

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will not solve the rising problems,

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essay I would like to explain why

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might not be the best solution. The two main reasons why I would disagree with

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statement is

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because of the convenience to travel from one destination to another. People would resort to using their own vehicle in order to travel, as the public transport facilities are not well developed.

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, it has become unavoidable for people to use their vehicle.

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, people are ignorant about the pollution their vehicles are causing to the environment, even though they are well informed regarding climate change and depletion of natural resources.

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, effects due to the pollution have been discussed all over the world and awareness has been provided through education and social media, but still most individuals even world leaders take

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matter lightly.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Discourage
Incentivize
Alternative energy
Public transportation
Lower-income
Carpool
Ride-sharing
Congestion
Urban planning
Pedestrian-friendly
Tax incentives
Electric and hybrid vehicles
Emissions standards
Cleaner vehicles
Congestion charges
Bicycle lanes
Sustainable

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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