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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#libraries #waste #money #computer #technology #functions
The advent of technology has negatively impacted the number of people visiting libraries. Perhaps
this
 could be the reason why a fraction of society opines that, local libraries ought to be closed down as computers can do
this
 job
instead
 of saving money.I firmly disagree with
this
 statement and will explain the reason why in
this
 essay.
To begin
, libraries enhance the reading habit of a person.To explain
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reading books helps us to acquire knowledge and improve our language skill to a great extent which are necessary in both education
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as well as
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career life of an individual.
For instance
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a survey conducted by the university of Leicester in the UK in the year 2019 reflected that 90 % of the highly successful business tycoons have a regular reading habit right from their childhood.
Also
, local library is a place where people meet and mingle which help to create and maintain a healthy social life.
Hence
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by restoring public library by modern technology
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it can harm the society and individual development massively.
Additionally
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many libraries contain historical data, stories and evidences that cannot be found on the internet or computer data.These precious information should be preserved from being extinct and have to be handed over to the future generation
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so that, they will
also
 be aware about the culture
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 tradition and other imperative facts about our history.Even though computers are quick
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 convenient and reduce
wastage
Suggestion
waste
 of money for maintenance and staff
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it is not on a par with books
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Thus
, it is will be a bad idea to remove libraries ever in future. In conclusion
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even though modern computers have some merits like saving cost and easy to access
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it cannot be equal to the benefits provided by the
libary
a building that houses a collection of books and other materials
library
 and I strongly accord with it. Government should take necessary actions to introduce new user friendly libraries along with saving the existing ones from
further
 destruction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repositories of books
  • promoting literacy
  • community engagement
  • equal access to information
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
  • personalized assistance
  • educational programs
  • cultural events
  • safe spaces
  • community meetings
  • tactile experience
  • preserving historical documents
  • important cultural repositories
  • fostering a sense of community
  • communal hubs
  • serene and focused environment
  • conducive to study and reflection
  • irreplaceable value
  • distracted environment
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