The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in furniture industry.
The given process diagram provides information about steel
Use synonyms
rods
manufacturing in the industry which makes furniture.
Fix the agreement mistake
rod
Overall
, the process Linking Words
consist
of eleven stages, beginning with Change the verb form
consists
processing
of raw material and ending up with Add an article
the processing
inspection
of Add an article
an inspection
end
product.
First of all, raw materials Add an article
the end
such
as iron ore, yellow ore and carbon etc are mixed together in a container. Linking Words
Then
, Linking Words
this
raw material mixture is subjected to Linking Words
high
temperature of about 1300 to 1500 C for melting. Correct article usage
a high
This
molten mass is Linking Words
then
transferred to Linking Words
smelting
cabin for its refinement. In the Correct article usage
the smelting
next
stage, Linking Words
condescent
metal is allowed to pour into Correct your spelling
condescend
candescent
ingot
machine. Ingot pour is Correct article usage
the ingot
further
attached to a cooling container and the metal is passed through nozzles to strand casting. The temperature of Linking Words
metal
dropped to 60-100 C at Correct article usage
the metal
this
level. Linking Words
Subsequently
, these Linking Words
coldcstrands
of metals are allowed to pass through rollers and heating Correct your spelling
cold strands
machine
. After hearing, surface checks of these metal Fix the agreement mistake
machines
rods
are done through measuring automation. After measurement, Use synonyms
cutter
cut down the Correct article usage
the cutter
rods
to Use synonyms
appropriate
size and these Correct article usage
the appropriate
standard sized
metal Add a hyphen
standard-sized
rods
are stamped in Use synonyms
Linking Words
next
step. Correct article usage
the next
Finally
, at the Linking Words
last
stage final inspection is done for Linking Words
release
of Add an article
the release
end
product.Add an article
the end
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