A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs , including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Animals are one of the living creatures like the humans. Animals have been widely used by humans in different ways to fulfil several needs. Some people believe that animals should be treated well because they have the same rights as the humans, whereas others think that it is more important to
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animals as we need for
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and medical research. I will discuss both
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a mental position from which things are viewed
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and give my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, some people believe that humans do not have the right to exploit animals as they are
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living beings. Animals
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have the same feeling as human beings. They
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feel pain whenever they are injured or killed.
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The animals
are God's creatures like humans, so they
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deserve respect. Many people kill animals for
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. They think animals have more nutrition.
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of killing animals for
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they should eat healthy vegetarian
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like green vegetables and some fruits which provide huge benefits to the body.
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using animals for experiments, business or making clothes and many others is inhuman. These activities not only hurt the animals, but
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destroy the balance of nature. People must not
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animals for their necessity.
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, some people believe that God has created animals for the benefit of mankind. Some people think that animals are really important as
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sources. They can provide nutrition
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for
the humans and for
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they kill the animals. Scientists do
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research
and tests on animals
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so that they can find any defect before applying that on humans
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If they directly apply that
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to
humans that may cause any serious diseases. Even doctors
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body parts
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the body parts
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creatures to make new medicines and to cure some dangerous diseases. Animals are
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the method of earning money. Human needs cows and buffaloes to provide milk and to cultivate their farming areas. To recapitulate, I hereby suggest that
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the government
of any nation must not allow
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the use
of animals for experiments,
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and other harsh activities because they
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have similar rights as human beings.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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