Some people think that teenagers should follow what the old people say whereas some believe that it is good for teenage people to challenge what old people say. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

Undoubtedly, time is changing unceasingly and so are the ways of adoring seniors’ awareness in miscellaneous aspects of our life and considering their consequential role in our society. Whether young adults should obey the orders of the aged people or not is a fiercely debated topic that divides people.

However

, it is argued by some group of people that elderlies

have owning

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have owned

are owning

a preventing to make a mistake by youth if they hold an experience. In

this

combative

world

, the prospective flourish cannot be appeared in terms of

deficit older group

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the deficit older group

deficit older groups

via youngsters’ refinement. In following paragraph, the

second

viewpoint will be

analyzed

examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts

analysed

carefully.

To begin

with, from the

yore

a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days

year

to now, the more consideration of seniors’ advice by teenagers, either big or small mistake, the less mistakes will be

happened

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happening

by

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with

them and process of activities will be held more severity. Considering a junior teacher in an institute and pursuing experienced

once which

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once, which

leads to a success in their carrier can be counted as a vivid illustration. Doing so, in any difficulty with pupils or students supposing a council with older leaders hamper causing fighting among

involved group

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the group involved

the involved group

.

This

prominently obvious

example can

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example, can

pronounce that taking elders as a light to support our responsibilities can hinder a numerous mistakes in getting through our assignments. In

this

essay, despite of pronounced grateful validation of

this

trend, it is denied as an exponentially imperative solution according to our non-stop developing

world

.

Nevertheless

, in

surge

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a surge

the surge

of our swiftly changeable

world

, observing older people’s perceptions cannot be a pure fundamental criteria to achieve the feat, in reference to competitive days. In the past decades, young population in their

twentieth

the time of life between 20 and 30

twenties

were supposed to get married in order to care their ancestors’ tradition.

Although

, in recent century,

this

belief has been replaced by getting long term aims to supply more luxurious and satisfactory life which is feasibly practicable in adolescent ages.

Consequently

, young population

have been ignored

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has been ignored

their customs in

this

way. By inquiring into mentioned instance, it is vividly proved that not only do the young

generation overlook

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generation, overlook

previous old-fashioned habits, but they

also

observe their

existence

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existing

circumstances due to improve the quality of their way of living. To conclude, after a careful scrutinizing of blessing and

disfavor

the state of being out of favor

disfavour

of

following

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follow

seniors’ recommendation, it is apparent that in

never

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the never

-ending ruthless

world keeping

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world, keeping

old customs does not bring out thriving opportunity to victory and it has lost the necessity of being as a key part.