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Trump sends scorching letter to Pelosi ahead of House impeachment vote

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President Donald Trump, on the verge of becoming the
third
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 US president to be impeached, sent an extraordinary letter to House Speaker Nancy
Pelosi
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 on Tuesday, excoriating House Democrats and casting himself as a victim of an attempted coup. A day before the full House is set to vote on articles of
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impeachment accusing
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impeachment, accusing
 him of abusing his power and obstructing lawmakers' investigations, Trump wrote in his indignant six-page missive that
Democrats
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the Democrats
 would come to regret their efforts when voters cast ballots
next
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 fall. Employing falsehoods and exaggerations, he bemoaned the
process
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 as woefully broken, wildly claiming that "(m
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ore due
process
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 was afforded to those accused in the Salem Witch Trials." He accused
Pelosi
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 of portraying a "false display of solemnity" during the
impeachment
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process
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. "No intelligent person believes what you are saying," Trump wrote in the letter sent on Tuesday, adding: "History will judge you harshly as you proceed with
this
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impeachment
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 charade." Responding late Tuesday,
Pelosi
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 said she'd been working and only saw the "essence" of Trump's letter. "It's really sick," she said. The document was a brash public display of
resentments
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the resentments
 that Trump has been fostering since the start of the
impeachment
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process
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. His associates say he is deeply aggrieved at the situation and views the prospect of being impeached as a stain on his legacy. Trump and
Pelosi
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 have had a history of tense and often personal fights, which have been highlighted by the
impeachment
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 inquiry launched
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 fall. Their most recent White House meeting, in October, was cut short because of the insults they hurled toward each other in the Cabinet Room.
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