Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments’ responsibility. others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

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Many people believe that protecting nature is a governmental responsibility.

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, some people think

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responsibility. My own view on the matter is I strongly agree with these two statements. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument. First and foremost, there is no denying that the environment nowadays needs more

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to be concerned

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I believe every government and individual should contribute to

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issue.

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, the simplest way for the governance to participate in

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problem is by giving some funding to support the population to the action in order to save nature. What is more, giving the best education and awareness campaigns through schools can be an ideal example here. Delivering valuable lessons to students about spreading awareness of the current world situation may bring good results in the future.

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, as an individual responsibility, every single person can implement the 3R method (reduce, recycle, reuse) to make the surroundings better.

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, bringing own bag

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shopping to avoid overusing plastic or keeping a plastic container after purchasing food and reusing it.

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, reducing in cause of carbon by taking public transportation rather than private vehicles is

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a good example. Again, the government ought to spread public transport in every spot to citizens so individuals may be interested in taking urban transportation services. To draw the conclusion, every action in order to keep nature healthy takes every single person not only the governance to have excellent results.

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, the governments indeed have to make a lot of effort to be followed by the populations in the campaign of saving the world.

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Introduction/Conclusion

Ensure that the essay has a clear introduction that introduces the topic and clearly states your opinion. Include a conclusion that summarises the main points and restates your opinion.

Cohesion

Use a range of cohesive devices effectively to help with the flow of the essay. Transition words and phrases can greatly improve the clarity of progression of ideas.

Coherence

The essay should include a logical sequence of ideas that builds a clear argument or discussion. Ensure that paragraphs have clear main ideas and are organized logically.

Task Achievement

Fully address the task by clearly discussing both views presented. This includes providing relevant supporting details for each view as well as explicating your own position on the issue.

Task Achievement

Introduce clear, comprehensive main ideas for each paragraph that directly relate to the task at hand. Elaborate on these ideas with detailed support and pertinent examples.

Task Achievement

Support your main points with relevant, specific examples. Avoid general statements that do not directly support your argument or discussion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

274 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainable development
Eco-friendly
Conservation
Renewable resources
Carbon footprint
Emissions
Biodiversity
Climate action
Grassroots
Legislation
Environmental stewardship
Recycling
Deforestation
Greenhouse gases
Ecological balance
Public awareness
Habitat preservation
Corporate social responsibility
Ecosystem services
Pollution control

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