The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is opinion that nowadays academic

education

is not any more necessary for being successful.

the

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The

skills and qualities require will provide in other ways. I tend to agree with former argument and I will explain why in

this

essay.

To begin

with, success doesn’t

need academic

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need, academic

skills.

That is

if people want to be successful they could learn

such

qualities in the

field

they want be successful just by experiences. A good example of

this

empirical

experiences

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experience

is I myself haven’t any experiences about constructing building when I went

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work I get many skills which I didn’t have in university

education

days.

Furthermore

, I think

education skills

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education, skills

just can help in your

field

and your experiences will save you in hard moment and if you

just be

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are just being

a student in your

field

then

, you probably not become successful till you haven’t work experiences. A

further

reason is that we are now in

an era which the

Suggestion

an era in which the

industrial revolution is ended and we are now in an IT era. To put it differently IT revolution needs more skills and quality which does not acquire with university educations. Take skills which

has been

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have been

perennial problem

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a perennial problem, for

a perennial problem for

perennial problems for

for example

; we see many uneducated people in social media that have obtained many success and fame and money just by their experiences and skills about social media and

subscribers

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subscriber

interest.

Therefore

, the prosperity doesn’t

need academic

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need, academic

degree that

just require

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just requires

a little work

experiences

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experience

and skills which you acquire just by working. To conclude, I ones again reaffirm my position that I completely agree skills and qualities just acquire by your great

endeavor

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavour

and hard working. Academic

education

will just help you in some way of your

field

Wed Dec 18 2019

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