The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is opinion that nowadays academic

education

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is not any more necessary for being successful.

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skills and qualities require will provide in other ways. I tend to agree with former argument and I will explain why in

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with, success doesn’t

need academic

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need, academic

skills.

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if people want to be successful they could learn

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qualities in the

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they want be successful just by experiences. A good example of

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empirical

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experience

is I myself haven’t any experiences about constructing building when I went

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work I get many skills which I didn’t have in university

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days.

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, I think

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education skills

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education, skills

just can help in your

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and your experiences will save you in hard moment and if you

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are just being

a student in your

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then

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, you probably not become successful till you haven’t work experiences. A

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reason is that we are now in

an era which the

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an era in which the

industrial revolution is ended and we are now in an IT era. To put it differently IT revolution needs more skills and quality which does not acquire with university educations. Take skills which

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have been

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a perennial problem, for

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; we see many uneducated people in social media that have obtained many success and fame and money just by their experiences and skills about social media and

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subscriber

interest.

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, the prosperity doesn’t

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need, academic

degree that

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just requires

a little work

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experience

and skills which you acquire just by working. To conclude, I ones again reaffirm my position that I completely agree skills and qualities just acquire by your great

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a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

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and hard working. Academic

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will just help you in some way of your

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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some Universities in less developed countries hire professors from well-known universities to improve the quality of education. Some believe that this is not a perfect solution and there are other ways to enhance the quality of education. DO you agree or disagree?

Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent where they live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 250 words.

Some children speand a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?