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Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behaviour and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion. Write at least 250 w

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Among few, even
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe that academic clothes are the best shield for the pupils in the education society
,
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 to make the ground fair for all the fellow
student
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students
,
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,
 which leads to decrease in disproportions of social and financial factors.
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, it
motivate
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motivates
 the younger ones to concentrate on scholastics
instead
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 of their costumes
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
 as Many of them think that it intrudes over the learners freedom
on
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of
 expression and
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 not having
a
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an
 optimistic outcome on the conduct and school attainment. On the
first
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 hand, an academic clothes play a crucial role in the education society. It maintains an equality among the students
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 there are students from several financial
background
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backgrounds
 who are treated fairly. It doesn’t only persuade to achieve success in the theoretical
practice but
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practice, but
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 to keep up the discipline.
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Further it
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Further, it
 is
a
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an
 economic factor which is influenced
in
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by
 the society. For illustration, uniforms are cost effective for the parents to buy three
set
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sets
 of clothes for the academic year.
On the other hand
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,
 children wearing their dress
code make them
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code to make them
 creative and feel confident. Interested clothing doesn’t have
change
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a change
on
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in
of
to
 the character and
also
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 no effect on the studies. Many opponents have the opinion that wearing the non uniform attire brings a disproportion between the students
.
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.
For example
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,
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,
on attiring school uniform
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,
 children concentrate on their education rather than on the
clothing where as
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clothing, whereas
clothing whereas
 in non uniform, they focus on the clothing
further
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,
 it is adventitious to ragging
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 To sum up, In my
opinion academic
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opinion, academic
 clothing
are
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is
 the best guard for the learners and
also
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 form
a
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an
 equality in the field
.
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