some people think that government spending on the restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. instead they should spend money for housing and road development. To what extent do you agree?

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gorvernment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
belives
accept as true; take to be true
believe
in spending money on housing and road
development
in our
society
rather than to start restoring old buildings based on the following observations.
firstly
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Firstly
,
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,
money spent on housing and road
development enhance
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development to enhance
good
governace
the persons (or committees or departments etc.) who make up a body for the purpose of administering something
governance
and
infrastructural
development
to new
government
on board
,
Accept space
,
however
old buildings cannot be well maintained and preserved by the
society
to the present
government
.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
road
development
is one of the major
infrstructures
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructures
that develop and bind two or three
community
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communities
or
society
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societies
together.They
also
civilized our
society
and render easy way of transporting goods faster and easily.
government
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Government
building housing
such
as
estate
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an estate
for
community
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the community
are changing the standard of living of the people for good in that
community
.
Thirdly
,
Accept space
,
most
nowaday
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
government
only thinks of developing the
society
by providing good roads and housing for
community
inorder
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in order
for them to make names for
themselve
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
and trying to lay good foundation for the incoming
government
to take over
,
Accept space
,
beside their names will be
remember
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remembered
when and after
they
of them or themselves
their
leaves the
government
sit.
conclusively
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Conclusively
,
Accept space
,
government
should always put the
community
needs
first
,
Accept space
,
however they
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however, they
should try to delight and render good
governace
the persons (or committees or departments etc.) who make up a body for the purpose of administering something
governance
by providing good roads and housing for the
community
that elected them in power so that their names will not be put to shame after their
government
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural heritage
  • historical value
  • architectural value
  • tourism boost
  • economic benefits
  • sustainability
  • job creation
  • property values
  • urban development
  • traffic congestion
  • quality of life
  • balanced approach
  • fund allocation
  • modern needs
  • restoration
  • preservation
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