Topic: Write a letter to your friend telling them about a trip you recently went on. Where you went and why you chose that place What you did and enjoyed during the trip camping for the first time in my life, barbeque, fishing Invite your friend to visit that place with you in the future

Dear Aayush, I hope you’re doing well. It’s been a

while

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since we

last

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caught up, so I thought I’d write to share news about my recent trip

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Hill Station. By the way, how have you been? You know how I usually

spent

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my weekends at home? But

last

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week I decided to try something new.

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last

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week my classmates and I visited the Saputara Hill Station,

the

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place

with

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full of natural beauties,

such

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as forests, lacks, and mountains. It really made me

stress free

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stress-free

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. On top of that, we did that journey by car, where we were passing through the beautiful

sceneries

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throughout.

Besides

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this

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, we organised a camping on a bay of the Narmada

river

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River

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. Not only

this

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but

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also

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we enjoyed fishing and

barbeque

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a barbeque

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party as well. If you could join

there

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them

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, I’m sure you’d enjoy

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it a

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lot. Honestly, it’s made me more curious to visit that place again, and I can’t wait to tell you more about it in person. So here’s what I was thinking. Our class is going to organise that trip again

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next month, so I am inviting you

for

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that. Would you be able to join us in that plan? If

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you can join, I’m sure it’ll be

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great fun for you

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also

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also,

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as you love to explore

the

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nature. Anyway, I’d better wrap

this

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up for now. I’m really looking forward to

see

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you in person. Write back soon and tell me your view. Take care, Avi Patel

avipatel9831

Aug 15, 2025

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grammar

Fix small errors. Use 'lakes' not 'lacks', and 'stress-free' as one word.

clarity

Make short, clear sentences. Break long lines into two.

structure

Have one idea in each paragraph. Start with place and why, then what you did, then invite.

tone

Sound warm when inviting. Use 'Would you like to come?' or 'Please come with me.'

tone

Friendly and warm tone throughout.

content

It mentions all parts of the task: place, actions, and invite.

content

It shows interest in going to the place again.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

254 words

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