Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In general, International
turisim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
incresing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
day by day.
while
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While
international
tourisim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
terrorism
has
lot
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lots
of advantages
such
as experience
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
treditions
an inherited pattern of thought or action
traditions
tradition
allover
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all over
the
world
,
Accept space
,
It creates
lot
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a lot
of problems too.
in
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In
my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would argue International
tourisim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
has so many advantages than disadvantages.
World
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The world
is becoming very small due to technology
reveloution
act of ascertaining or fixing the value or worth of
evaluation
and airline industry.
traveling
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Travelling
Traveling
from one country to another country is very easy than ever before.
as
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As
a result, there are so many international
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
travels
all over the
world
.Some
occations
something you have to do
occasions
locations
actions
, It creates problems with local people
because of people have
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because people have
their own traditions and religion beliefs.
ocassinally
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Occasionally
Ocassinally
, these traditions and beliefs conflicts with international
traveles
a person who changes location
travellers
.
for
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For
instance, few countries treat people very bad manner if the persons drink
alochal
.
rest
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The rest
Rest
of the
world
take
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takes
it as casual.
that's
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That's
where conflicts
starts
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start
.
as
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As
consequence
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a consequence
,
locals
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the locals
hate international
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
travels
.
On the other hand
, international travel has so many benefits. Since
world
is becoming so small, knowing different cultures is
helpfulful
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hopefully
hopeful
many ways.
knowing
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Knowing
different cultures and traditions always gives an advantage of exploring the different corners of the
world
.
in
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In
this
way,
no
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No
signle
being or characteristic of a single thing or person
single
person boundaries are
limitted
small in range or scope
limited
to any single place.
for
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For
example, in the
world there
Accept comma addition
world, there
are so many places where people are living very bad condition because of poverty.
international
any of several international socialist organizations
International
torusion
help them to get
raid
relieve from
rid
of their poor living conditions.
in
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In
this
way people from
developed
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developing
countries learn different angels of the
world
.
Although
, there are few disadvantages of international
tourisim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
terrorism
, International
torisim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
is
only way
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the only way
people can connect
togeather
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
without physical boundaries.
in
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In
my opinion
,
Accept space
,
international travel has many advantages than disadvantages.
at
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At
the same time international
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
should learn and respect the local culture where they are visiting.

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