Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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turisim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
incresing
day by day. becoming greater or larger
increasing
while
international Suggestion
While
tourisim
has the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
terrorism
lot
of advantages Suggestion
lots
such
as experience diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
treditions
an inherited pattern of thought or action
traditions
tradition
allover
the Suggestion
all over
world
,
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,
lot
of problems too. Suggestion
a lot
in
my opinion, Suggestion
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i
would argue International refers to the speaker or writer
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tourisim
has so many advantages than disadvantages.
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
World
is becoming very small due to technology Suggestion
The world
reveloution
and airline industry.act of ascertaining or fixing the value or worth of
evaluation
traveling
from one country to another country is very easy than ever before. Suggestion
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Traveling
as
a result, there are so many international Suggestion
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travelers
all over the a person who changes location
travellers
travels
world
.Some occations
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occasions
locations
actions
because of people have
their own traditions and religion beliefs. Suggestion
because people have
ocassinally
, these traditions and beliefs conflicts with international Suggestion
Occasionally
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. a person who changes location
travellers
for
instance, few countries treat people very bad manner if the persons drink Suggestion
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alochal
. rest
of the Suggestion
The rest
Rest
world
take
it as casual. Suggestion
takes
that's
where conflicts Suggestion
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starts
. Suggestion
start
as
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consequence
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a consequence
locals
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the locals
travelers
.
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travellers
travels
On the other hand
, international travel has so many benefits. Since world
is becoming so small, knowing different cultures is helpfulful
many ways. Suggestion
hopefully
hopeful
knowing
different cultures and traditions always gives an advantage of exploring the different corners of the Suggestion
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world
. in
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In
this
way,
no
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No
signle
person boundaries are being or characteristic of a single thing or person
single
limitted
to any single place. small in range or scope
limited
for
example, in the Suggestion
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world there
are so many places where people are living very bad condition because of poverty. Accept comma addition
world, there
international
any of several international socialist organizations
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torusion
help them to get raid
of their poor living conditions. relieve from
rid
in
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In
this
way people from developed
countries learn different angels of the Suggestion
developing
world
.
Although
, there are few disadvantages of international tourisim
, International the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
terrorism
torisim
is the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
only way
people can connect Suggestion
the only way
togeather
without physical boundaries.in contact with each other or in proximity
together
in
my opinionSuggestion
In
,
international travel has many advantages than disadvantages. Accept space
,
at
the same time international Suggestion
At
travelers
should learn and respect the local culture where they are visiting.a person who changes location
travellers
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