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Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this statement?

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Medical facility has to be chargeable despite of the individuals earning.
Also
 the fitness of
individual
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individuals
an individual
the individual
 can manage
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 their limit and ideally they are the whole
responsible
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responsibility
. I disagree with the statement.
Firstly
Accept comma addition
Firstly, this
this
 essay will discuss about affordability of medical expenses of each citizen in the country and
secondly
, society
also
 taking a major part
on
Suggestion
of
in
 the fitness of
individual
Suggestion
an individual
the individual
individuals
.
To begin
 with, everybody cannot afford the expense due to unexpected health problems. As a citizen of any country should receive some basic facilities as a free of service that has
to facilitated
Suggestion
to be facilitated
 by the government that too mainly on the medical. We have all classes of people living together, so despite of their
earnings medical
Accept comma addition
earnings, medical
 has to provide as a free of cost.
For example
, medical card for each citizen of the country, to undergo cashless treatment in any hospital
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 for any kind of health problem
On the other hand
, everyone in the world
are moving
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is moving
 towards the modern
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
, which in turns contributing towards health issue in a way of not having regular physical exercise, food habits and sleeping timings. All humans are now
become
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becoming
 a machine in their day to day life cycle and food products should meet the agreed permissible quality level.
For example
,
junk foods fat percentage
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the junk foods fat percentage
 should be a major role in cardiac problems.
Secondly
, outsourcing project works with uneven working hours. In conclusion, one and all cannot have the fund to pay for the unexpected medical problem and it is not
only individual responsibility
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the only individual responsibility
 as a whole it is the responsibility of everyone in the modern society. I
thus
 completely disagree with the statement
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