With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?

#development #communication #people #friends

I believe that even though the

internet

has made communicating

easy

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easily

we remain lonely and it is getting harder to befriend people.

Firstly

this

essay will look at why we can’t

trust

and befriend everybody online and secondary, I will explain how the

internet

has failed to connect people. The crux of any relationship is

trust

, and unfortunately trusting everybody online is naïve to a fault. The anonymity afforded by the

internet

has made it all too easy for anybody to create a fictitious identity, one might argue that there are checks and

balances but,

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balances, but

these are far from being foolproof. Using image editing software, a person with basic computer skills can forge almost any document, it is little wonder, our news feeds are peppered with numerous accounts of online fraud and identity theft. Almost

everyone

who has an email address will be familiar with the “Nigerian prince email”. I do not advocate that

everyone

online is committing fraud, but we cannot blindly

trust

everyone

on the World Wide Web

On the other hand

, it is presumptuous to assume that the

internet

has reached

everyone

. Many developing countries still struggle with necessities, let alone have an uninterrupted supply of electricity. Having

internet

access is considered a luxury.

Secondly

, the majority of people from rural areas are not computer literate and will be unable to use the

internet

even if they have access. It would be foolhardy to assume that ‘

everyone

’ is connected to the

internet

as can be seen with people live in rural India. In conclusion, owing to a lack of

trust

we remain

skeptical

denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion

sceptical

of the people that we

have met

Suggestion

had met

online these connections are mere

acquaintances not

Accept comma addition

acquaintances, not

‘friends’, to compound matters the access to the

internet

is not universal. I

thus

entirely disagree with the statement

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geographical gaps
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social media platforms
messaging apps
revolutionized
physical distance
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camaraderie
immediate surroundings
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