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The charts illustrate the amount of nutrient substances
such
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 as
sodium
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, saturated fat and added
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sugar which
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sugar, which
 people eat in 4 meals per day (
breakfast
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,
lunch
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,
dinner
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 and snacks) in the USA. If eating them a
lots
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lot
, the body may
be not healthy
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not be healthy
. Units are measured in
percent
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. Overall, the
percentage
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 of
sodium
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 is the highest figure in
dinner
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, while snacks hold the largest
percentage
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 of added
sugar
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.
First
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 of all, it can be clearly seen that 23
percent
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 is the
number
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 which belongs to added
sugar
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 in
dinner
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. Meanwhile, the
percentage
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 of
sodium
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 in snacks is similar
with
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to
 that in
breakfast
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 with 14
percent
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,
also
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this
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number
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 is lower than that
in
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at
lunch
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 (29%). Specifically, both the
number
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os
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
 saturated fat and that of added
sugar
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 has the same
percentage
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 with 16% in
breakfast
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. Simultaneously, people in the USA consume about 26% saturated fat in
lunch
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,
this
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number
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 is higher than the
percentage
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 of
sugar
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 added in the same meal (19%). Obviously, Americans tend to add more
sugar
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 in their snacks because of its
highest
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higher
percentage
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 (42%), while only 21
percent
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 of saturated fat is consumed
in
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at
lunch
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.
Moreover
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,
sodium
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 and saturated fat are ranked the
first
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 place due to the highest
percentage
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in
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at
during
dinner
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 with 43% and 37% respectively. In contract, only 21
percent
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 the
percentag
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentage
 of saturated fat utilised in snacks. In conclusion, people in the USA consume the large amount of three nutrients in
dinner
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, compared to the less amount of that in
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breakfast
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the breakfast
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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  • cultural exchange
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