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The charts illustrate the amount of nutrient substances

such

sodium

, saturated fat and added

sugar which

Accept comma addition

sugar, which

people eat in 4 meals per day (

breakfast

lunch

dinner

and snacks) in the USA. If eating them a

lots

Suggestion

lot

, the body may

be not healthy

Suggestion

not be healthy

. Units are measured in

percent

. Overall, the

percentage

sodium

is the highest figure in

dinner

, while snacks hold the largest

percentage

of added

sugar

First

of all, it can be clearly seen that 23

percent

is the

number

which belongs to added

sugar

dinner

. Meanwhile, the

percentage

sodium

in snacks is similar

with

Suggestion

that in

breakfast

with 14

percent

also

this

number

is lower than that

Suggestion

lunch

(29%). Specifically, both the

number

to the same degree (often followed by 'as')

saturated fat and that of added

sugar

has the same

percentage

with 16% in

breakfast

. Simultaneously, people in the USA consume about 26% saturated fat in

lunch

this

number

is higher than the

percentage

sugar

added in the same meal (19%). Obviously, Americans tend to add more

sugar

in their snacks because of its

highest

Suggestion

higher

percentage

(42%), while only 21

percent

of saturated fat is consumed

Suggestion

lunch

Moreover

sodium

and saturated fat are ranked the

first

place due to the highest

percentage

Suggestion

during

dinner

with 43% and 37% respectively. In contract, only 21

percent

the

percentag

a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)

percentage

of saturated fat utilised in snacks. In conclusion, people in the USA consume the large amount of three nutrients in

dinner

, compared to the less amount of that in

breakfast

Suggestion

the breakfast

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

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712 words

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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fluency
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