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You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your experience tell him why you are interested in the job say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir, My name is Valli, and I came across your recent advertisement regarding the position available for an assistant manager to work in the evening hours. So, I am writing to apply for
this
 part-time job in your restaurant. Certainly, I have been pursuing my masters in business administration because of my passion
towards
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management
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 field.
Moreover
, I have done my Diploma in hotel management.
This
 gives me an adequate basic and informed knowledge about certain aspects of the hotel field. Since
,
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 the working hours are after
post lunch
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, I could be able to work after my study hours.
In addition
 to that,
this
 job would provide me with a certain practical experience, it would be highly helpful in studies as well as financial aspects. On the whole, being
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 epitome of sincerity and diligence, I would be an efficient candidate for
this
 respective position.
Finally
,
nevertheless
, I have a decent career qualification which I could use in order to enhance your restaurant's reputation. I am looking forward to your reply and perhaps meeting for an interview.
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 sincerely, Valli
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