You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your experience tell him why you are interested in the job say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir, My name is Valli, and I came across your recent advertisement regarding the position available for an assistant manager to work in the evening hours. So, I am writing to apply for
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part-time job in your restaurant. Certainly, I have been pursuing my masters in business administration because of my passion
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management
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field.
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, I have done my Diploma in hotel management.
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gives me an adequate basic and informed knowledge about certain aspects of the hotel field. Since
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the working hours are after
post lunch
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, I could be able to work after my study hours.
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to that,
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job would provide me with a certain practical experience, it would be highly helpful in studies as well as financial aspects. On the whole, being
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epitome of sincerity and diligence, I would be an efficient candidate for
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respective position.
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,
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, I have a decent career qualification which I could use in order to enhance your restaurant's reputation. I am looking forward to your reply and perhaps meeting for an interview.
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sincerely, Valli
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