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Some people think that children should learn how to compete, but other think that children should be taught to cooperatevto become more useful adults. Express some reasons for both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the issue of bringing up children to become
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successful
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 has become important. As we are living in a competitive world, some people argue that offspring should be taught how to compete
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 others believe that they should be taught to cooperate. In my opinion, both these virtu are
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essential for them to become a useful civilian. The first and foremost is that competitions motivate children to enhance their performance. Giving rewards to students for their achievement
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 them to make more efforts to defeat other competitors. In
this
 way, juveniles are more likely to prepare well for other competitions including university education and employment.
For instance
, a recent survey conducted by London
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 has shown that there is a strong competition for university entrance exams
as well as
 to get
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 for better jobs.
Secondly
, when youngsters start any business, they have to compete with
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 to succeed in life. Undoubtedly,
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 person is
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 adult in society. To justify my
further
 views, there are many fields where cooperation is required. Juveniles can be taught
this
 virtue in many activities like sports or any other game.
For instance
, when they have to play team sports
such
 as cricket, hockey, football and so on
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they have to cooperate with their team members.
Finally
, when teachers give
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to students
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they
also
 can be taught how to manage and cooperate with each other. To put it in a nutshell, today's era is highly competitive. So both
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virtue is crucial for human being to become
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ideal and useful citizen in
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society
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