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Modern cultures around the world have become similar as compared to the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Culture
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 means the idea, customs and social behaviour of a particular
society
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. It is directly related
with
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to
 civilization. Social traditions, conviction of the
people both
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people, both
 religious and moral
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also affect
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also affects
 the cultural values. In that
sense we
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sense, we
 can say that good
culture
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 can
gives
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give
 birth of a knowledge based
society
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.
Culture
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 has changed in a variety of ways over the passage of time. Technological advancement plays a crucial role for transformation of cultural norms from one generation to another. It is a continuous process indeed. Modern
culture
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 is a changing version of the ancient
culture
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. If we closely look at the cultural deviation of different
society
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 we can see that the cultural gap of various societies around the
world
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 has been reduced gradually after 1950’s. It has changed its shape and monoculture has been evolved. The main reason behind
this
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 transformation is globalization which makes the communication of different societies easier than ever. The advent of new electrical equipment as well as availability of
computer
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a computer
computers
 with fast internet facilities make it more convenient and bring the
world
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 at one’s fist. Like many other things in the
world
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 modern homogeneous
culture
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 does not have unmixed blessings rather it has
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 some negative development which we cannot ignore. If we examine the positive
development we
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development, we
 can see that it helps a person to think himself as a global citizen rather than a member of a small
society
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. When a student goes to a foreign country for study purpose and if he can combine the positive elements of two different
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culture
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cultures
 it would a competitive advantage of his whole career.
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 a person who is in touch
of
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with
 different
culture
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 can improve his horizon of knowledge in
broad perspective
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a broad perspective
the broad perspective
 and can use it for the better of his country. We everybody knows that big invention comes by broad mentality and it cannot be
build
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built
 up without assimilation of different
culture
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.
On the other
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hand globalization
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hand, globalization
 makes
culture
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 of different small
society
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 obsolete and putting them down in peril of extinction. Many different cultures have already been disappeared due to fierce competition with the developed
culture
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. Homogeneity of
culture
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 weakens the strength of identity of individuals and
society
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.
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 cultural homogeneity or monoculture is beneficial for overall development of the
world
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, cultural diversity is
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 necessary because it related to the biodiversity of a particular locality. In that sense we have to find out a better combination of both conceptions to defend the cultural diversity through promotion of cultural minorities as wel

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