Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternatives ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Law enforcement agencies, government, and policymakers are finding ways to diminish the
crime
rate
. While some people think that
longer
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long
jail sentence is the panacea for all sorts of punishment others believe that there are certainly other ways as well.
This
essay will discuss both views and device possible solutions. In my opinion, employment and
drug
awareness programs can decline
crime
rate
drastically. According to some people life imprisonment is the best possible punishment to deter the crimes.
However
,
this
idea fails drastically.
Nowadys
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Nowadays
jails are full of
criminals but
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criminals, but
still there is no any significant
declination
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decline
in
crime
rate
. In order to reduce
crime
rate
new strategic policies must be
deviced
come up with (an idea, plan, explanation, theory, or principle) after a mental effort
devised
to stop the
crime
at
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in
the
first
place. The best possible way to stop
crime
to find the root cause and prevent it from happening.
On the other hand
, there are plenty of liberals who argue with longer prison sentences. In
their
in or at that place
there
perceptiion
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Perception
Perceptiion
, One must find the root-cause that makes people
to commit
Suggestion
commit
crime
. The two main contributing factors are unemployment and
drug
addiction. When jobs are scarce in society and in order to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
basic amenities people often indulge in
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
crime
.
In addition
,
drug
-addiction
also
makes
situation
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the situation
form bad to worse by spoiling the radical thinking of youths.
For instance
,
accoring
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
to India Narcotics
survey 80
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survey, 80
% of criminals are
drug
addicts. Clearly,
drug
-addiction and unemployment are the prime factors that
leads
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lead
people to anti-social activities. In conclusion, there are
serveral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
ways to stop crimes rather than sentencing life long prison. The best possible solution is to prevent the factors that
intice
provoke someone to do something through (often false or exaggerated) promises or persuasion
entice
incite
people to commit crimes. In my opinion, by providing employment opportunities and
drug
awareness programs, we can surely aspire for
crime
free world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deterrence
  • Recidivism
  • Rehabilitation
  • Restorative justice
  • Community policing
  • Economic development
  • Reintegration
  • Punitive measures
  • Inhumane conditions
  • Overcrowding
  • Social services
  • Tailored approaches
  • Public sentiment
  • Root causes
  • Taxpayer burden
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