The graph shows the information about international conferences in three capital cities in 1980 – 2010

The graph shows the information about international conferences in three capital cities in 1980 – 2010
The line graph compares the
number
of international
conferences
held in three different capital cities during the
year
1980 to 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of
conferences
held in
City
A and
City
B
was
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gradually decreased.
However
, in
City
C a rapid increase in organizing international
conferences
can be seen until the
year
2000.
Initially
, in the
year
1980, both
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cities were organizing
the
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different
number
of international
conferences
, 35 in
City
A and 30 in
City
B.
However
, a rapid change between
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two cities can be seen in organizing
conferences
until 2005 when they both held an equal
number
of
conferences
,
that is
around 27. Interestingly, by the end of the period,
City
B has organized more events than
City
A, 26 and 24 respectively.
In contrast
,
City
C had not organized any international conference in the
year
1980,
this
city
seeing
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number
20, in the total
number
of meetings in the
year
1990.
Moreover
,
this
growth is
further
extended until the
year
2000 when
City
C
has
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organized the highest
number
of
conferences
(35), after that, by the end of the period they organized a total of around 31
such
conferences
marking them the topmost hosting
city
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, conferences, year, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • international conferences
  • capital cities
  • trend
  • fluctuates
  • dominates
  • peak
  • trough
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • periods
  • data representation
  • interpretation
  • measure
  • y-axis
  • x-axis
  • comparative analysis
  • statistical figures
  • conclusion
  • summary
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