Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society , but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like . What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world ?

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imagining
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concentrating
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ociety culture
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society, culture
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ommuity
a group of people living in a particular local area
community
are caring about p
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the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
culture in v
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of many different kinds purposefully arranged but lacking any uniformity
various
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(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
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brought about or set up or accepted; especially long established
established
meet p
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extremely
positively
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a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statements
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to or in any or all places
everywhere
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be far away from negatively and sadly persons in school, u
niversites
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
and daily life.
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if you have sadly friends, you have double opportunities, may you have to bring him opportunity advice
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otherwise
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the future
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a component that is added to something to improve it
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for that, making ready a
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a lot
of libraries and be it attractive for r
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someone who lives at a particular place for a prolonged period or who was born there
residents
and visitors.
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make or cause to be or to become
create
creates
created
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place
for tourists to spend interesting time
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like libraries that exists at universities a
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(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
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develop
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is cooperated
between community members and
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small families
a small family
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of
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making that daily habit
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an item of information that is typical of a class or group
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a teacher, but when going back to home, she is cooking a lunch and cleaning the house.
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possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact registration to sporting
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a preparation (usually made of sweetened chicle) for chewing
gum
game
jam
and making available for all.
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the fee
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should handle
should be handled
for all levels. That's mean it is not d
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in a very impressive manner
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drastically
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expensive, but
must be average
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opinion because p
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puts
put
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a thing constructed; a complex entity constructed of many parts
structure
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for
children inside the
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a contest with rules to determine a winner
game
like
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a preparation (usually made of sweetened chicle) for chewing
gum
jam
game
that near from my home. A
second
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point is that caring of bodies to become h
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having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
health
and l
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an air mass of lower pressure; often brings precipitation
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an important issue
for perfect c
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a group of people living in a particular local area
community
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a contest with rules to determine a winner
game
having b
odysitter
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a babysitter
babysitter
and it is a
vaillable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
unavailable
at any time. To sum up, as we have seen, there are no easy answers to
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question. On balance,
however
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, I tend to believe that if we want to become p
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a perfect society
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by strongly
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we must initiate by our s
leves
your consciousness of your own identity
selves
slaves
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we require from other to become like
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