The bar charts show data about computer ownership, with a further classification by level of education

The bar charts show data about computer ownership, with a further classification by level of education
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The bar charts show data about
computer
ownership
, with a
further
classification by level of
education
, from 2002 to 2010.
Overall
, the
last
decade has seen
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substantial growth in
computer
ownership
in general, and across all educational levels. A steady but significant rise can be seen in the percentage of the population that owned a
computer
over the period. Just over half the population owned computers in 2002,
whereas
by 2010 three out of four people had a home
computer
. An analysis of the data by level of
education
shows that higher levels of
education
correspond to higher levels of
computer
ownership
in both of those years. In 2002, only around 15% of those who did not finish high school had a
computer
but
this
figure had trebled by 2010. There were
also
considerable increases, of approximately 30 percentage points, for those with a high school diploma or an unfinished college
education
(reaching 65% and 85% respectively in 2010).
However
, graduates and postgraduates proved to have the greatest level of
ownership
in 2010, at 90% and 95% respectively, 20 percentage points higher than in 2002.

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